Talk:Giraldus

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You've obviously put quite a bit of work into this, but wiki articles are supposed to be encyclopaedic--that is to say, it should be in the third person, and maybe a little less dramatic ;) All in all though, coming along quite nicely, might be a QP worthy article if it shapes up a bit. --Shaikoten 09:23, 16 February 2006 (CST)


Is this a bit better? I have more ideas if not, I'm creative! -Gir

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Minor revisions and adjustments. - Gir 12/11/06

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